Never knew before
how it would be if butterflies
fluttered inside stomach, my heart
melt like chocolate.
Memories so vivid.
I could never forget.
You have always kept
me smiling.
I loved the way you talk to me.
Now I know what true love is.
It will never let you go.
No matter how much rough it gets
claiming me he said my first love.
nice one.. All firsts will have everlasting memories in or mind.. especially love :)
ReplyDeleteoops, i meant "in our mind" :)
ReplyDelete"butterflies fluttering inside the stomach" was a good imagery...good dude:-)
ReplyDeleteI love the use of words; sweet and nice poem...:)
ReplyDelete@ Anand yeah true :-)..
ReplyDelete@ Nasnin nasser thanks :-).
@ Saru singhal thank you so much :-)..
Nice play of words
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote this, simple and cool..
ReplyDelete@ Rahul Bhatia thanks for dropping by :-) ..
ReplyDelete@ Siddhartha Joshi thanks for comments :-)...
congratulations for the fluttering thts happening :)
ReplyDeleteThat is nice..! Enjoy the moment.. nice post..
ReplyDeleteIf you are looking for a review..
"claiming me he said my first love. " this line seem to have some puntuation issues..
If not "Never Mind..!" :)
nice>>>>>>> superbbbbbbbbbbb >>>>>>>>>
ReplyDeletebutterflies fluttering>>>>>>
may b ur heart s full of flowers>>>>>>>.
@ sawan thanks :-)..
ReplyDelete@ KP ya thanks for notify about it. and i never mind :-) ..
@ sri thanks for leaving comment machi :-) kindal pannala thane :-P ....
Ah.. first love. Yes you have said it beautifully - like butterfilies fluttering in your stomach!
ReplyDeleteOhh...lovely!! Simple but striking use of words!!
ReplyDeleteWell done!
The butterfly effect strikes us all at a point :)
ReplyDeleteSimple and nice post :)
It was a good read!
Take Care :)
Thanks a lot philo :-)
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